Editing Diary

Friday 9th December

• Capture tape
• Deleted unneeded things

Monday 12th December

• Decided on Town interview questions
• Liz on the sun beds footage
• Made the beggining by linking all the people together in the same shot and switching these around

Tuesday 13th December

• Put in helens interviews
• Added dip to black between shots

Wednesday 14th December

• Added jade doing her make-up
• Added Jade interview
• Sped up the make-up scene

Friday 16th December

• More town interviews making them link with what was coming next
• Dip to black inbetween shots
• Added heather

Monday 19th December

• Changed the size of some of the shots so they were all the same
• Added article on Katie Price
• Paths to different parts of Katie Prices article

Wednesday 21st December

• Converted and downloaded the videos of archieve footage
• Edited these to the right size
• Edited these in together

Thursday 22nd December

• Found appropriate music
• Converted music
• Edited music to fit
• Put in audio transitions

Friday 23rd December

• Added video transitions (dip to black and cross fade)
• Fill sound left, only coming out of one side
• Downloaded fonts
• Added titles
• Added effect on titles

Monday 2th January

• Made minor ajustments to editing
• Checked everything to make sure it was right.

Edit Decision Lists

After making our logging sheets we realised we had far too much footage for the 5 minute long opening sequence. When we looked at them all we noticed that some of the footage wasnt good enough for our 5 minutes so we were glad to have got so much recorded. We wanted to cut each bit quite small so it made it choppy and quick moving to attract our target audience.

Ellis's body - 4.55 - 4.61

Helens interview - 4.61 - 9.72

Sam L body - 9.72 - 9.78

Heathers interview - 9.78 - 17.52

Cut away picture - 17.52 - 17.61

Sam B body - 17.61 - 17.68

Decs body - 17.68 - 17.72

Jade interview - 17.72 - 26.83

Jades make up scene - 26.83 - 27.87

Liz Case underwear - 27.87 - 29.45

Liz Case Sunbed - 29.45 - 56.22

Sunbed Shop - 56.22- 61.03

Town interviews (2nd time) - 85.33 - 103.59

Beauty Shop outside - 103.59 - 104.02

Logging Sheets

1st interview - 0.00 - 1.31

2nd interview - 1.31 - 2.58

3rd interview - 2.58 - 3.55

4th interview - 3.55 - 4.55

Ellis's body - 4.55 - 4.61

Helens interview - 4.61 - 9.72

Sam L body - 9.72 - 9.78

Heathers interview - 9.78 - 17.52

Cut away picture - 17.52 - 17.61

Sam B body - 17.61 - 17.68

Decs body - 17.68 - 17.72

Jade interview - 17.72 - 26.83

Jades make up scene - 26.83 - 27.87

Liz Case underwear - 27.87 - 29.45

Liz Case Sunbed - 29.45 - 56.22

Sunbed Shop - 56.22- 61.03

Emmas body - 61.03 - 64.87

Town interviews (1st time) - 64.87 - 85.33

Town interviews (2nd time) - 85.33 - 103.59

Beauty Shop outside - 103.59 - 104.02

Filming Diary

Tuesday 8th Novermber:
- Started filming in town, in the golden sqaure to get some interviews.
- Did interviews in town with eight girls and one boy.
- One actors house where we filmed in underwearfrom side profile.


Thursday 10th November:
- We went to 3 actors houses to get some side profiles.
- Went to Thelwall beautitions to ask for permission to get cutaways of sunbeds and Nail stuff but they didnt reply.
- Took still pictures of beauty unlimted in Grapenhall.
- Took stills of hair salons in Thelwall.


Saturday 12th November:
-Went to two actors homes to get side profiles.
- Went to Ashleas house to film all different types of mae up being spilled out of a make up bag and made it into a title.


Wednesday 16th November:
- Went to Helen Davies house to film her interview but left the tape at home so couldnt do it due to timing.
- Went to 100 degrees to ask for permission to film around the salon and booked a date to do it.
- Went to four different beauty places and two hair salon in Lymm village to collect leaflets to make a montage out of them.


Thursday 17th November:
- Filmed a student from Priestley college discussing what surgical procejures she had done.
- Went to do some editing and realised everything we had recorded (all interviews) had no voice on it, so we had to go back and do it all over again.


Friday 18th November:
- Went to Jade Harrisons house to film her putting on make up.
- Filmed an interview of her discussing why she wears make up.
- Filmed the montage we had made out of the leaflets to get a cutaway.


Sunday 27th November:
- Filmed at 100 degrees again, from outside looking at the shop to get a few cut aways.
- Got some cutaways of the massage room in 100 degrees
- Actor Liz was recorded walking up the stairs going to the sunbeds.
- Liz recorded being id'd and paying to go on the sunbeds.
- Recorded getting onto the sunbed and taking off her make-up.


Tuesday 29th November:
- Filmed Helen Davies (Surgery patient) answering the questions about her procejure.


Wednesday 2nd December:
- Interviewed four girls at Warrington town at the Golden sqaure.


Monday 5th December:
- Interviewed Heather Shopland (surgery patient) answering questions about her procejure.


Wednesday 7th December:
- Went into class to capture the last bits of what we had recorded.
- Carried on editing
- Cut out the bits we didnt want to use or the bits that had gone wrong.
- Used a teacher from Priestley college to do our voice over.


Thursday 8th December:
- Made the Print Advert and completed it.
- Finished the Radio advert and gave it some last finishing touches.

Our Radio Advert

Radio Script

Broadcast on Key 103, we decided on this radio station becuase this is quite popular with women and younger girls, these are people who would be listening to this channel and would probably listen to our radio advert, the music would stand out to them as it's quite popular music.
Radio Script:

Is Beauty Worth Pain?

The new T.V series on BBC3 where three beauty obbsessed individuals have been followed through the process of sygery. Is this influenced by celebrities?

We also looked into the general publics views on themselves and looking to see if being natural is still an option.

Tuesday, 9pm, BBC3

Examples of Radio Adverts

Codes and Convetions of Radio Advert

Common codes and conventions of radio adverts include-

• Most commonly radio adverts are 30 seconds long, though some stations offer a 60 second slot
• They contain a voiceover
• often include a music bed
•  Contain infomation about how the company can be reached or watched if a television programme
• If for a television programme they contain clips of the programme
• If for a television programme they pose questions that will be answered in the show

Interview Questions

* When did you have plastic surgery?
* Why did you have plastic surgery?
* How much did it cost to have surgery and do you think it was worth it?
* Do you think it has changed you as a person?
* Would you recommend it to other people?
* After having this procedure would you have anything else done?
* Was it your choice to have plastic surgery or did somebody convince you?
* How long did it take you to recover?
* What was your main concern of the surgery?
* If your daughter had the same problem would you allow her to have surgery?
* What were the options if the procedure wasn’t taken into place?
* Is this procedure covered by insurance?
* How did you find your surgeon?
* Were there any limitations after surgery?
* Are you happy of the effects of the surgery?
* How long did the operation last?
* What was the success rate of your operation?
* Was there any extra that wasn’t included in the price?
* What type of implant was used?

Location Sheet

1. The first shot is based at all their own houses as they were in their bra and knickers so they could feel more comfortable.
2. The make up scene was at her own house located in her bedroom.
3. We did the question interviews in Warrington town centre, this was so we could get a wide range of answers.
4. Plastic Surgery patient Helen Davies talks about her experience located at her own house.
5. Question Interviews 2 - located at Warrington town centre again.
6. Scene of the make up located in her house.
7. Beauty Fanatic Jade Harrison located in her own room.
8. Through this next scene are actor is going on the sunbeds we located this at 'Hundred Degrees' which is a sunbed place.
9. Next shot was located downstairs of the Hundred Degrees in the massage room.
10. Plastic surgery patient Heather Shopland located at her own house doing the interview.
11. Filmed a student at Priestley college for an interview.
12. Filmed in a nail department to show the products people use through beauty.
13. Got still pictures from Grapenhall of a beauty shop.

Shots we didn't use but were located:
1. Ashlea's house doing the title scene trying to make the word 'Beauty' in different types of make up.
2. A scene at one of our actors houses, we didn't use this as we couldn't use them in our film because they were a student of Priestley college.
3. Went to Thelwall beauticians to ask for permission to film there to get cutaways but we weren't allowed.
14. We went to 4 different beauty shops and 2 salons to try and film.

Voice Over Script for Documentary

Katie Price has had numerous surgical procedures, these include 5 boob jobs, liposuction and veneers. Surgery can be the answer to many peoples confidence problems most common procedures include Breast, eyes and nose. Influenced by many celebrities in the public eye. Through research we found out that Katie Price uses sun beds on a daily basis and has bald patches from gluing in her hair extensions.

Is it celebrities like this that have changed the way the public perceived themselves? Its not just celebrities that thrive to get this glamorous look.

Sunbeds are estimated to cause 100 deaths from melanoma every year in the UK. Sunbeds also cause premature skin ageing which means your skin becomes cause, leathery and wrinkled at a younger age. When the tan fades, the damage remains. Using sun beds for the first time before the age of 35 increases the risk of developing melanoma skin cancer by 75%.

People who are most at risk are younger people, people who have a lot of moles, people with fare skin, people who burn easily, people who have had skin cancer in the past, people with a family history of skin cancer.

People who use sun beds under age increase their risk of malignancy by 55% in the UK. Almost 9000 cases of meligmaloma are diagnosed each year, and more than 1000 people die from the disease each year.

Print Based Advert

Print Advert Examples

Codes and Conventions of Print Advert

One strong key image

Words are kept to a minimum

The title is always included

The slogan is also included on the print advert

The scheduling information always included

Channel logo is prominent  and on the right hand side

The print advert is usually a4 landscape size so that it is versatile and can be used at various sizes in newspapers, magazines or on billboards

Story Board

Proposal

The topic of our documentary is going to be about external beauty, this will explore the advantages and disadvantages of things such as plastic surgery, usage of the sun beds and also the process a girl goes through to look good. We will be discussing the risks of surgery and influences people have as to why they go through these procedures, this could to be things as insecurities or in influences through celebrities and the media.

Our documentary will be direct, addressing the audience, although it will be direct it will also be informal directing the audience in a friendly way being unbiased towards plastic surgery and surrounding topics.

We have decided to place our documentary on BBC, we chose this because they show a lot of documentaries relating to ours, for example’ Snog, Marry, Avoid’ they also have a series of documentaries broadcasting at the moment  about lives of different teenagers with extraordinary lives. We also chose the BBC to broadcast our documentary as they are an unbiased and so is our documentary. We have to chosen to broadcast the programme at 9 o’clock on a Wednesday, we decided upon this because we feel this would be a typical night where our target audience would be at home relaxing, as it is half way through the week it will be advertised before hand letting people know when it’s on.

Our target audience will be woman aged 16-40 this is because after conducting our research people relate women with beauty more than they do men. We decided upon the age because 16 year old girls are beginning to get more body conscious and we found older people think a lot about plastic surgery because of the effects of aging. 

So far we have conducted a questionnaire which we handed out to thirty members of the general public, ranging from different ages and genders, the outcomes of these gave us ideas for our initial ideas. To further our research we shall interview a plastic surgeon which will give us knowledge along with statistics on his field of work making our documentary reliable. We will also visit a health advisor to further our research into the truth about the risks involved with sun beds and the reasons for things such as the change in law making the legal age to use sun beds to 18.

As well as using primary research we will also use the internet to enhance our knowledge on our chosen subject, we will be able to gain archive footage by using the internet as well as getting more statistics and real life stories about things such as surgery gone wrong.

Our documentary will not be telling a story as such; because of this it will classify our documentary as non-linear. As our documentary is unbiased it may flicker from different opinions on the subject showing the risks to the advantages.

In our documentary we will include various interviews with people who have had plastic surgery, we will ask what they had done, the risks they took, how it went and how they feel about it now. We will also be interviewing an expert such as a surgeon or a worker at a tanning salon. We will also include various cutaways of things such as questions asked to the general public and before and after pictures of celebrities of the changes that were made to their bodies.

Equipment we will need to use when filming and editing will be things such as tripods, camera, tape, microphone, a computer with Premier installed on it to edit.

Running Order

·         clips of peoples bodies shown in a side profile changing with different peoples bodies-10 seconds

·         Pictures of body parts with titles shown over the top – 10 seconds

·         Questions asked to the general public about what they’d change about them – 30 seconds

·         Cutaway of news paper stories about surgery with narrator over the top talking about statistics- 30 seconds

·         Questions asked to general public – 20 seconds

·         Celebrity before and after pictures narrator– 40 seconds

·         Interview with someone who’s had surgery discussing positives – 1.50 seconds

·         Cutaway – 10/20 seconds

·         Archive footage of somebody having surgery – 30 seconds

·         Interview with someone discussing negatives about surgery, gone wrong- 3minutes

·         Narration about semi-permanent things with background of someone in a tanning salon – 30seconds

·         Questions  to the general public about sun beds/hair extensions etc – 40seconds

·         Show someone getting id’d for going on the sun beds – 10 seconds

·         Interview with someone who works at a tanning salon – 1 minute

·          Cutaway of archive footage of a news clip about someone who’s addicted to the sun beds- 30 seconds

·         Interviews showing peoples reactions to the statistics – 30 seconds (10.40)

·         Interview with surgeon asking about patients and their opinions discussing negatives/positives-2.30 minutes

·         Cutaway of someone being consulted about surgery shows the pictures of the difference it makes- 1 minute

·         3 minute advert break

·         Show archive footage of tattooed make-up with narrator over the top – 40seconds

·         Interview with someone who’s has make-up tattooed 1.30minutes

·         Questions asked to the public about tattooed makeup-40seconds

·         Interview with a tattooist who does the procedure- 2minutes

·         Ask the general public about the amount of makeup they wear, in the day and when they go out – eyelashes and extensions etc. – 40seconds

·         Cutaway of someone wearing heavy makeup taking it off fast forwarded -20seconds

·         Look into the media (newspapers magazines) about why people feel the pressure to wear so much makeup- 1minute

·         Narration about people having surgery to prevent ageing, before and after pictures- 20 seconds

·         Interview older people whether they’d have surgery to prevent ageing- 40 seconds

·         Interview someone who’s had facelift/Botox etc. – 1.30

·         Show someone getting botox with narrator giving statistics- 20 seconds

·         Narrator giving conclusion – 20 seconds

Secondary Research

True Story

14 year old Sophie Watson has had make-up tattooed on, she's had her eyebrows, eye liner and lip liner. She got her make-up tattooed on because she competes in Beauty pageants.

The make-up tattoos arn't illegal becuase it isn't classed technically as a tattoo, although Sophie does have two illegal tattoos, one on her wrist and one on her stomach which she got behind her mothers back.

Websites that link Boobs bums and Botox. Video on 4od:

http://www.channel4.com/programms/bums-boobs-and-botox/4od

Mother and daughter, how mother has had Botox, teeth bleached, hair straightened and a boob job:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zjq4o5SNhFc

What happens on the day of surgery:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7yPXs4Wkno0

Woman having surgery, showing surgery and interviewing her as it goes:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y_t5g2v2S6c

Celebrities, before and after surgery:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0eyQY8ZuO8k&feature=related

Percentages of different surgical procedures

This spread sheet shows us the amount of people getting plastic surgery in England and the rises and falls of the amount of men or women getting different types of surgery in different years. it shows us that 9,430 breast enlargements were done in the UK in 2010 going up by 10% from 2009 and women getting liposuction went down by 3.8% from 3,010 down to 2,896 from 09-10.

Statistics

These are some more statistics i have found whilst doing my secondary research-

• Sunbeds are estimated to cause 100 deaths from melanoma every year in the UK
• Sunbeds also cause premature skin ageing, which means that your skin becomes coarse, leathery and wrinkled at a younger age. So when the tan fades, the damage remains.
• Using sunbeds for the first time before the age of 35 increases the risk of developing melanoma skin cancer by 75%.

Examples of Surgery

Boobs, Bum and Botox. T.V program on Channel 4.

 

Other Websites

4od:http://www.channel4.com/programmes/bums-boobs-and-botox/4od 

Mother and daughter, how mother has had Botox, teeth bleached, hair straightened and a boob job:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zjq4o5SNhFc

What happens on the day of surgery:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7yPXs4Wkno0

Woman having surgery, showing surgery and interviewing her as it goes:

                                                                 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y_t5g2v2S6c

                                                   Celebrities, before and after surgery:

                                                   http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0eyQY8ZuO8k&feature=related

London Fashion week

Article on Plastic Surgery

http://www.healthguidance.org/entry/206/1/Plastic-Surgery-Gone-Wrong-Not-Just-News.html 

"Even relatively minor mishaps can be unsightly and embarrassing, and plastic surgery gone wrong includes an enormous range of problems, from capsular contraction in breast implants (where the implants harden painfully) to problems with the wound and the slippage of implants inserted in a range of locations, including cheeks, chin, and butt. Surely we wouldn't wish these accidents on our worst enemies - unless they were in the public eye."

Images of Surgical Pen.

Information Igor and Grichka Bogdanoff

http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-1279525/Igor--Grichka-Bogdanoff-French-twins-unrecognisable-plastic-surgery.html

"Thirty years ago they were the heart-throbs of French television with their own primetime series on science fiction.

Now Igor and Grichka Bogdanoff look more like the alien life forms they used to report on.

The twin brothers have had so much plastic surgery they are barely recognisable.

Posing for pictures as the 150th anniversary party for luxury jeweller Chopard, the pair - now aged 60 - looked freakier than ever"

http://plasticsurgery.about.com/od/faqsgeneralinformation/a/bad_ps.html ->

"From questions about costs of plastic surgery, to the history and definition of plastic surgery, this is the place to find general information on all things plastic surgery related."

Before surgery

Now - After Surgery

Information on Katie Price

Katie price regulary uses the sunbeds on a daily basis, she has bald patches in her hair from her hair extentions being glued in all the time and has becone addicted to cosmetic surgery making her facial expressions hard to change.

Interview feedback

interviews

Questionaaire

1.       Age?

16-20   21-30   30+

2.       What gender are you?

Male/Female

3.       Have you ever had plastic surgery?

Yes/No

4.       If yes, have you ever thought of the risks?

Yes/No

5.       Do you know anybody who has had surgery?

Yes/No

6.       Do you know anybody that has had surgery gone wrong?

Yes/No

7.       Do you think differently of people who have had obvious plastic surgery?

Yes/No

8.       Would the thought of ageing/wrinkles persuade you to have surgery?

Yes/No

9.       Would you associate men with surgery?

Yes/No

10.   What age do you think it’s OK to have plastic surgery?

18 and under   above 18   Above 30

11.   Have you ever used sun beds?

Yes/No

12.   Have you ever thought of the risks of sun beds?

Yes/No

13.   Do you think the changed law making the legal age to use sunbeds to 18 is a good idea?

Yes/No

14.   Would you feel comfortable in public without make-up on?

Yes/No

15.   How much make-up do you wear?

Light   Medium   Heavy

16.   What item of make-out would you never leave with-out wearing?

yes boy                                                                                                        lol

17.   Would you ever get permanent make-up tattooed on?

Yes/No

18.   What would you change about your body?

yeah man                                                                       boom

19.   Do you think of pain as worth it?

Yes   No   Maybe

20.   How much do you think a boob-job would cost?

1000-3000   3000-5000   5000-8000